科技與日常生活（核心論段和結尾）

　　It’s well-known to us and all around us that technology is playing an increasing role in the improvement of our life. The first and foremost aspect that should be highlighted here is that ,As a matter of fact,tectnology makes our life more convenient.Nowaday,almost all of us are enjoying the modern transportation and telecommunication based on the tachnology..

　　Dr. Zhang,a famous antropologist at TsingHua university,pointted out “The standard of our living as well as the society has been promoted by the leap of technology”.what’s more,it is the modern medical system and remedy which are evolved from technology that ,in a broad sense,keep people physically stronger.According to a recent suvey by the average life span of humen- being has rised to 79.1(胡亂編造得), from 60 because of technology.One more point,though not conclusive yet,that can never be overlooked is that our life are been enriched considerablelly for the application of technology to the realm of recreation. As can be seen everywhere,people now find spiritual fufillment by playing computer games and by surfing on net.

　　All in all,20 century had wittnessed a series of technical explosion.From a long-term of view,so vital is technology to our life that we should lay much more emphasis on exploring it.

　　以上節選自MBA論壇，一培訓學員的作文。我仔細看了下感覺有曹老師弟子的影子。順便回憶下曹老師的作文課精要（系統一），與大家一起分享。要下班了，今天晚上繼續完成這個貼。

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　　眾所周知，科技在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用。首先也是最應當被強調的是：事實上，科技使我們的生活更加方便。人們現在正在享受著以科技為基礎的交通和通訊手段。

　　清華大學的教授張兵教授是一位著名的人類學家，他曾指出“科技的飛躍推動人類生活水平和社會的進步”。其次，源于科技的現代醫療手段和醫療體系使人們更加健康。根據中國日報的調查，因為科技的原因，人們的平均壽命大大提高….。還有一點，雖然這一點還未有定論，但永遠不應被忽略，即：因為科技應用于娛樂，使人們的生活變得更豐富多彩。正如到處可以看到的，人們通過網絡和電腦游戲找到了精神上得滿足。

　　總之，20世紀見證了一系列得科技大爆炸。從長遠得角度來說，科技是如此得重要，以至于我們應該在未來更加重視發展它。
1)debate
a)sideA +sideB（就是分別說出Ａ和Ｂ的觀點），比較陳舊的一種
b)topic+side Ｉ
第二種就是總結一下話題，然后說出自己的觀點．例如有些大學生已經結婚，有些大學生正準備結婚，我認為．．．．．．
my view(support or oppose)
sth is of great value and meaning and import(是支持）如果表示反對就將great---little value---harm, meaning---disadvantage

2)graph
a)描述數據的變化
１）變化很大２）表現在那，漲跌情況,注意一頭一尾３）數字表達能力（cite data)
表示增加的詞匯（程度依次增強）growsoar iseskyrocket
表示減少的詞匯（程度依次增強）dropfalldeclinedescend
動詞修飾　gradually emarkablydramaticallyshaply
動詞后介詞to
from......to

3)cartoon
漫畫的意圖主要有三種諷刺（satirize)＼啟發(inspire)娛樂（entertain)(一般不考）
social phenomenon--------negative or life philosophy
主要弄清楚漫畫元素對應的象征意義（metaphor)比喻
他以漫畫（圓型跑道上一個人，起點也是終點）為例子[FS:PAGE]
track比喻life ,runner比喻anyone,endless比喻success.比喻人生的一個成功接著要面臨（new taskchallege)終點也是起點

推薦使用的句子結構
１）it structure(13的句子要用）形式主語（dummy subject)
i love you應該表達為
１．it is you who i love
2.when day breaks and night falls, i love you
3.if you love me .i love you
4.i love you because there is no bodyelse i can love
5.I loveyou so much that i can not live without you

2)it+系表＋that(to+v)
it is quite obvious for us that s+v
it goes without any question that
it is said that
it is pointed out by the authorities that
it is 狀語　that s+v

3)倒裝結構（inverted stucture)
s+v+0(adv)------only+ adv+ 助動詞＋s+v+o
for example: i love you yesterday=only yesterday did i love you so much do i love you that i can not live without you

4)插入語(自由使用）
Ｉ，as it is, love you
as it is =to tell the truth=to be
frank=in a broad sense

5)so ....that...
the picture is so vivid that i can not help tempted to take another look
=so vivid is the picture that

6)as is well -known
as far as I am aware(據我所知道）

再看看前面那篇文章，真的很像曹門弟子的文章．　
以上是曹老師講課的主要內容，寫出來以作自己復習，同時希望能給其他精華網考友分享．